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Rini Lost Chapter 1

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Chapter 1: Experiment mix up


It was a seemingly peaceful night. The sky was clear and the stars shone brightly. That would soon change as a few ominous clouds moved in, along with the arrive of 2 men in in white cloaks with the words G.G.I. R&D Team 2010 in green lettering on the back. "damn it Chuck this is illegal" said the 1st man. "Yes tru but if we don't get test results soon... Well just remember what Gilligfan did to the last team that failed to meet a deadline" said Chuck. "Fine lets just please do this! I still have nightmares from that incident" replied the other man. "youre such a wuss Jake. Anyway heres the house" said chuck as they aproached the Tsukino residence.



Chuck then activated 2 small devices and they snuck up to Rini's room. Once there they put on gas masks. "well at least those sillence phasers work" said chuck. He then sprayed a green mist around Rini. "good now the brat won't wake up on us" said jake. They then lifted her out of bed. Rini having been too exausted from a rough last day of school hadn't changed out of her school uniform.



The men opened a portal and carried Rini inside. They emmerged at a new beach in the next town over that was created by of all things a prior giantess attack. Chuck set Rini down on the soft cool sand while Jake pulled out some paper work, a tape recoreder, a laptop,  and what looked like an oxygen tank with the words C350 on it.



Chuck then put an oxygen mask on Rini and turned on the tank. A pink gas flowed through the tubing into the sleeping girls lungs. Jake spoke into the tape recorder: "This is Team 2010 conducting a human test pf chemical C350. The subject is a young female aproxamately age 11. So far the subject shows no response to the C350 gas. My partner has just taken her vitals and all appears normal." "uhjake we grabbed the wrong stuff. We were supposed to test C521 not C350" said chuck. "crap! Well whats C350 do" asked Jake.


"um well according to the computer Its Team 2009's project and its some kind of new growth enhancement formula" replied Chuck. "f#$%! Lets get out of here"said Jake quickly packing things up.


They left in such a hurry that Rini was left alone on the beach still breathing the C350 gas from the forgotten tank.

What will happen next?
How will Gill torture the 2 men when he finds out?
Will us writers ever stop asking questions at thend of a Chapter? find out in chapter 2.
Ok heres a nice new piece from me at long last. I felt bad for depriving my my watchers so here chapter 1 of my remake of :iconmasterofra: "s Classic Luna Pi Malfunction Rini Lost the original can be found here fav.me/d1rjsra or on vggts I have his permission so enjoy!and thanx to MasterOfRa His other accounts are :iconmasterofobelisk: and :iconmasterofslifer:
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Shooting-Red-Star's avatar
you two are complete and utter failures
Chuck i'll spare you jufor havi te same name as Mr. Norris
as for you Jake... well... hell just broke loose......